the contrast you make between light and dark–the silver of the moon versus the golden hair of the lover, the darkness of the heart versus the beloved’s unsullied beauty–beautifully done. “for darkness is always thirsty” is a wonderful way to end the last poem.
Thank you so much! I’m really fond of dualities, I’m really happy someone looked into my poem and saw clearly on how I composed it. You made me a very happy amateur!
Very nice🤗
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Thanks Mairi ❤
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the contrast you make between light and dark–the silver of the moon versus the golden hair of the lover, the darkness of the heart versus the beloved’s unsullied beauty–beautifully done. “for darkness is always thirsty” is a wonderful way to end the last poem.
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Thank you so much! I’m really fond of dualities, I’m really happy someone looked into my poem and saw clearly on how I composed it. You made me a very happy amateur!
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you’re welcome; my pleasure.
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“How beautiful is darkness” — wonderful line. Thank you.
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Epic!
— Simple as that.
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Obrigado Cunha!
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So many beautiful lines that I couldn’t pick a favorite. I’ll definitely read this more times, to savor all the layers.
And thank you, by the way, for the follow :).
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Beautifully expressed. Thanks for the follow.
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Beautiful words…I must read it again
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