Small Compositions (english poetry)

As I’m trying to make a deadline for portuguese poetry, haven’t had much time to write in English. However, I do have these three failed poems I wrote. These are concept sketches more-so than actual poems, later to be turned into actual poems, but I abandoned these out of disinterest for the concepts themselves.

world breaker

prima

clover´


JOHNNY

19 thoughts on “Small Compositions (english poetry)

  1. No, not hopeless at all, Johnny. I love the idea of combining them, and yes, don’t lose the lines that “This is the Way” pointed out. Fine writing! And thanks for the “follow.” I’ll look forward to your posts.

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    1. Thank you so much Sarah! It means the world to me that a seasoned poet and reader like yourself sees some shine in a 22 year-old amateur, haha. I have long ways to go, so the motivation is ever-so appreciated.

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  2. It will be interesting to see how you rework these. They are not bad at all. But if you deem them to be less than you expected, at least you have some gemstone lines to steal from yourself.
    thanks for the follow,- Lorna

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