PAINTING (english poetry)

A short experimental composition I made to try out my skills with couplet rhyming. Not as good as I would like, but I’m getting there.

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JOHNNY

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24 thoughts on “PAINTING (english poetry)

  1. Very beautiful use of language. With one exception, the word ‘wanna’. Everything else is a lovely use of very elegant words, my own view is this colloquialism just doesn’t fit. Only my opinion though. I thought overall it was an excellent poem.

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