EMERALD CAGE (english poetry)

Wrote it all on one go, hence why it’s so big. I usually crop a lot while I compose.

Might not be good, but it’s the first composition where I didn’t truly care about structure, I just went with what felt right at the time, and I’m quite happy with the lightness of that.

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(Sorry about second publication, I actually forgot the poem on the first go, typical.)


JOHNNY

Hoje sou tudo no nada que sou, amanhã serei outro.

38 thoughts on “EMERALD CAGE (english poetry)

  1. I love it!! I’ve never really followed structure when writing ‘poetry’ hence why I chose to call mine a ‘collection of words’ instead. I think it gives it more oomph when written from the heart and structured overly by the mind. Xx
    P.s thnx for the follow.

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    • I’m very thankful for the words but don’t read ALL of them haha, theres over 55 at this point, and some are a bit bigger.
      Just go to my index page and see some whose titles catch your eye, if you wish!
      I will surely follow you closely and appreciate your work further!

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  2. superbbb poem sir…..u are a great writer..nd loved the theme…i do write poems but not so good as yours..bt still i want you to check out my poems at powerofwords97764921.wordpress.com….if you lyk it plz follow nd give me feedback sir

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  3. I am glad you did not care about structure for it is felt as it is written with all your heart! Beautiful lines! Thank you for adding rhythm and harmony to the world (“the world is made of rythms and harmonies …”)

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    • Oh, thank you for visiting and reading my work! I hope you see some glimpse of love in these, and I absolutely agree with you that the world is made of rythms and harmonies!

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