a dispute. (english poetry)

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12 thoughts on “a dispute. (english poetry)

  1. I don’t want to sound disrespectful. (Now can you feel the approaching “but”?”) it sounds a little pretentious. Not the poem, but the pretext. I don’t want to belittle your perspective. Just my two cents: Leave the pretext or make it a note at the end. It is somehow narrowing the reader’s perspective. Unless you want to drive them in a certain direction. Again, Just my point of view.

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