It was then. (english poetry)

I’m dipping my toes into confessional poetry. I’m awful at it, but is it quite fun.

it was then


JOHNNY

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45 thoughts on “It was then. (english poetry)

    1. Oh Kristian, you are the brilliant one! Always so kind and endearing, I feel ever-so-lucky to have you as a reader, you wouldn’t believe it.
      Thank you so much for enduring my experiments, haha, it has been a true joy.

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    1. They are all imperfect rhymes! People underestimate the power of imperfect rhyming, it can sound so lyrical, but also, not so overbearing and heavy.

      I’m glad you liked it!

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    1. Thank you so much!
      When I write more naturally, my compositions rely heavily on inner-rhymes and imperfects, because my rhythm expands and retracts according to the intensity of the words. I should do it more often.
      I’m very glad you enjoyed it, warms my little heart.

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    1. Thank you, haha. I’m not an English native and I had to self-teach myself the language, so, I always elate whenever I get complimented on language control.
      It means a lot to my little heart ❤️

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    1. Thank you Sue, it is my singular poetic talent: controlling inner arcs of thought. Everything else is lacking, but improving, little by little.
      Your feedback means bounds to me.

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    1. Thank you so much!
      All my poems are meant to be read aloud;
      The verse arrangement of this one would make it hard to fully sing (verse breaks akin to those of Uneasy Romance with Mayhem are more easily singable), but it is a great sign to me that you can picture this as a song.
      Melodies have a levity that text cannot provide, and if I can capture that levity, a whole world opens up. Again, thank you tons!

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