45 thoughts on “It was then. (english poetry)

    • Thank you so much!
      When I write more naturally, my compositions rely heavily on inner-rhymes and imperfects, because my rhythm expands and retracts according to the intensity of the words. I should do it more often.
      I’m very glad you enjoyed it, warms my little heart.

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    • Thank you, haha. I’m not an English native and I had to self-teach myself the language, so, I always elate whenever I get complimented on language control.
      It means a lot to my little heart ❤️


    • Thank you Sue, it is my singular poetic talent: controlling inner arcs of thought. Everything else is lacking, but improving, little by little.
      Your feedback means bounds to me.


    • Thank you so much!
      All my poems are meant to be read aloud;
      The verse arrangement of this one would make it hard to fully sing (verse breaks akin to those of Uneasy Romance with Mayhem are more easily singable), but it is a great sign to me that you can picture this as a song.
      Melodies have a levity that text cannot provide, and if I can capture that levity, a whole world opens up. Again, thank you tons!

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