To my Grandmother; I’d wish to make something better for her, one day. But I’ve always been enchanted with her choice to stay, despite everything, she stays in her home, and intends to die there and nowhere else. That is a beauty I cannot yet capture.
But one day, Avó, one day.
She wasn’t taught to read nor write, so I know my greatest communication isn’t adequate for her. But, growing up by her side, I knew to communicate differently; with truly firm hugs, and the trémule of one’s voice, the pulse of a touch — all truly worth saying, dispenses words, as it lives above, purely in the senses.
She will never read my poems, but she knew them before anyone did. She knew them, even those I do not yet know.
JOHNNY
Hi. Beautifully posed and prosed. Grand thoughts from a Grand-son. Thank You for sharing this.
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Shiro!, if I compelled you to comment, I know to have done a decent job. Thank you, truly.
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Hi… Your Words are from the Heart… i, Shiro could do no less. Compelled also to say as per the late Bruce Lee in one of his olden golden moments… “…Your Skills… are extraordinary…” Thank You for sharing.
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Bravo! ..I would applaud you in standing ovation (with a sigh), even if I am miles away.. it’s a beautiful symphony put together about your grandmother..
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Thank you so much Arjamagne! It means a lot coming from you, truly.
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WOW. PERFECT!
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Thank you!
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She sounds like a wonderful woman. Hope she’s doing well.
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She is aged, and spent. It was a harsh life, from Sun to Sun. But she clings, and we cling with her. She isn’t alone, so I like to believe she is doing as well as she had dreamt.
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JUST checking emails seen yours then thought no time, clicked open and the woman was readable in the email. Read it. It makes me feel good when I get caught in the flow or rhythm and that is what happened. I felt good reading it. You got skillz I respect and admire. Look forward to reading more. Stay up bro
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I didn’t know I sent emails, that is new! I’m glad you liked it Drew! It means a lot to me.
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I get new posts sent to me, email if I follow a site. Its on my settings. Been struggling to find inspiration recently it helps when I read good stuff anywhere. Found yours, thanx
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This is beautiful 🙌
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How beautiful ♥️
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Like you. I loved my grandma an saw that she died in her home..
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Perfect one..
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Grandes fontes de inspiração, estas avós. 😉
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I remembered my grandparents. Johnny, I am sorry I could not write to you. I could not write anything for many days.
My grandparents were refugees of a civil war, that led to partition of our country. They wept cause they could not stay. Maybe I will write about them to you. Hope you are in good health Johnny. Your poem reminded me of their lamentations to leave their motherland. Thank you.
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This is so beautiful, your explanation of it as well as the poem itself ❤
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Bravo!
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So beautiful✨✨
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Right now, your words bring back memories of my grandparents.
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A beautiful tribute to your grandmother.
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Absolutely beautifully, you will always be my favorite here!
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Your poem about your grandmother is breathtaking.
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This is beauty beyond just words! ❤️
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Thank you so much, Sommaiya!
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Hey Johnny. Where are you. Nothing new from your side for a long time. I hope you are doing okay.
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Just returned!
Thank you so much for worrying; I had some arduous times, but one must rise eventually. It is warming to feel missed, thank you, truly.
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Great piece, I really liked it! Am sure granma is reading from somewhere up there and applauding, too!
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She is still alive, but I do dearly welcome your warmth and regard. The reason why she cannot access these works is just because she cannot read.
But again, thank you so much.
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That’s so good to hear and I’m sorry if I misunderstood. God bless her & you! 🙏🏽
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No problem at all! I’m more than thankful you took your time to read.
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Wow. Incredible beautiful. ❤️
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It’s a marvelous poem. The tropes used are so unique. The vocabulary is so elegant, A marvel to read. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you so much, Anand!
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Simply wonderful. I hope you found a way to express these feelings to her. I left so much unsaid.
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Over the times, I’ve said much; It is difficult to grasp fully how she understands this world, as it is so starkly different from what I understand of it, but she knows I love her deeply, and I know she does so, too.
I suppose, upon a certain point of human communication, and especially after we experience this world of aesthetics, that is not just sufficient, that is the zenith of our humanity, and is conveyed in the most languid and silent of manners.
Thank you so much, and I’d urge you to find peace in the unsaid, as it holds much power, but such is a path one must take alone.
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I have no words great enough , wow . Beautiful .
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Amazing work. ..
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Reblogged this on words less spoken and commented:
Homage to our elders, beautiful work. Thanks for sharing Johnny.
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What an extraordinarily intriguing and beautiful post!
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So very beautiful Johnny. I’m happy that you have such a lovely woman close in your life, and that she has you. Do take care ❤️
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A lovely tribute to your grandmother. You really understand her so well.
Many thanks for following my blog, Johnny.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Beautiful 🍀
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Really great!
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You have an excellent command of the English language, and a heart two sizes too big.
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Oh, thank you so much!
My English still requires a little growth, as it is not my main language, and I have few chances of giving it any use. But I’m sure, someday, I will feel confident in it.
Again, thank you tons.
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You’re most welcome. What is your first language?
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Portuguese is my first, French is my second. I dabble in a couple of others, English is one of them.
Although my main impetus towards writing in English is its musicality, it contains a perfect coalescence of lyricism and atonality, making denser, like German, but lighter than German, since it has greater fluidity between individual structures.
It’s also super fun.
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That’s the most amazing paragraph I’ve ever read about my language. Kudos.
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This is really lovely. It’s gentle and peaceful, and poetic.
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wow, truly beautiful. you really captured a moment in this piece of writing.
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